And Then The Beginning Ended

And In Two seconds I thought you were gone.

(tom's POV)

I took off down the stairs, as fast as I could and finally ran out the doors f the building, and saw Bill hit the ground with a loud thud. "No...." I said under my breath, going wide eyed.  Blood was everywhere, and Bill wasn't moving. The meds ran over and pulled Bill onto a gurney and put him in the ambulance. I jumped into it too, and they took off to the hospital.

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"Is Bill okay?" I asked the doctor as he walked out 5 hours later. "Well, he lost ALOT of blood but he's breathing." Doc replied. "okay. can I go see him?" I asked. "Yes. But he might still be asleep." I didn;t bother listening, and I ran off into the room. Bill was laying there, pale as can be and with IVs sticking into his arms. I cried then and sat down in the chair beside the bed. "I'm so sorry...." I whispered to Bill. "Tomi?" I heard him say softy. My head shot back to him and his brown eyes fluttered open. "Yeah. I'm here, Billie." I said, puttign my hand under one of his. "Okay. I'm sorry I let go. I didn't mean to." Bill said, his voice tightening. "It's okay, Bill. I uinderstand." I replied. He nodded his head and looked at me and gave me a light smile. "God, you're so lucky you survived that jump." I said, grinning. "Yeah, I guess I am." Bill said. I sighed and gave him a smile. "Where's Gustav and Georg??" he asked. "Theyre at home. They wouldve came and visited you, but Georg got drunk and wouldve flipped out if he saw you like this." I replied. "Oh. Well at least you're here." Bill smiled. "yeah." I said with another grin. "Any idea when I'll get out of this place?" Billie asked. "Wheneva the doc says." I sighed. Bill almost cried then. But I leaned over and hugged him. "Come on, man, It'll be okay." I said, still hugging him. He cried then and I kept hugging him not letting go. Then I looked at him and repeated 'It'll be okay'. And our lips met then.

to be continued.

(sorry its so short! its 3 a.m!)

Das Fenster Offnet Sich Nicht Mehr.

Tom's POV

Bill screamed. And in a split second I heard the loud thud, even though I was 9 stories high.

"Oh my god....my brother is dead...." I said, under my breath, wide eyed.

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The Next Day.

Sitting in the waiting room of the hospital, those images flashing through my head. Bill's poor body sprawled on the ground, blood everywhere......

Doctor ShadowsMargera walked out. "Is he okay?!" I exclaimed, gettign up. "He should be okay. But I'm not too sure. He lost alot of blood, but we had a donor. You're brother's lucky. Only one in a million people survive from jumping this high. But he should be okay." Dr. ShadowsMargera said. "Can I go see him? please?" I asked. "Yes you can. I don't know if he's awake or not but you can go see." The doctor replied. I rushed into the room. There was Bill, pale as a ghost. It almsot made me start crying. He was asleep, and had IVs pf blood going into his wrists. I sat down in the chair beside the bed, and looked at my poor brother. I slipped my hand under one of his and held his hand in mine, starting to cry. It was my fault he was on the building anyway. If only I would have known how much he was in love with me before, none of this would've happened. "Tomi?" I heard a silent voice say, breaknig me out of my thoughts. I looked at Bill. His brown eyes fluttered open and he looked at me. "Tomi??" He repeated. "Yeah, I'm here." I replied, starting to cry more. "Tom, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to let go. I didn't want to let go. I- I didn't mean to.." He said, looking at me nervously. "No, Bill, It's my fault. If I wouldn't have said such stupid things to you, none of this would've happ-" I started, but Bill pulled his hands onto the back of my head and pulled me down to his face. Our lips almost met, but Georg and Gustav walked in. I pulled away. "Oh hey guys." I said, grinning. "Hi Tom. OMG BILL'S AWAKE." Gustav exclaiemd. Georg swayed side to side, I guess he was drunk. "Why did you bring a drunk Georg in with you?" Bill asked. "he wanted to come see you." Gusty said. Dr. ShadowsMargera walked back in. "Well, Bill can go back home today. But If he starts getting sick or something, you MUST bring him back." He said. "Okay." I said, and we got Bill and left.

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to be continued.

"Bette, Spring Nicht..."

Bill's POV

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Standing there on the roof of some random building, probably 9 or more stories high. All I could tell was the city was so far below me. Cop Cars, ambulances, witnesses...

they all were below. Tears dropped down my face as I was crying. I could've drowned myself, but I didn't want to. Plus, jumping could make me die faster. tears kept falling down. I leaned werily over the side, feeling like i was gonna get sick. I wanted to die fast. Of course. No one would care. I leaned farther over, dangerously.

Tom's POV

"Oh my God, Tom, where the hell is Bill?!?!" Rose exclaimed, holding onto Zacky. "I...I don't know....." I replied. My brother was suicidal of course ever since Georg broke up with him and started dating Craig.

"WE HAVE TO FIND HIM, TOM!! THIS COULD BE BAD!!!!" Zack said, wrapping his arms round Rose.

"I KNOW! God, just.....come on." I said running out the door. We found where he was almost in 9 minutes. Ambulances, people, all of those were gathered in front of a building, staring up. I looked up and almost screamed. Bill was standing there hanging dangerously over the side.

I broke back the cops and ran up the sairs of the bulding. I almost passed out as I was running up the last fligt of stairs. 30 or more flights. Ugh. But I didn't care, I cared about my brother.

"BILL!!" I exclaimed, running onto the building roof platform thing. "SPRING NICHT!!!!" I screamed.

I stopped in my tracks. Bill didn't bother turning to face me. "Why are you here, Tom?" He asked. "Because I don't want you to jump!!!" I cried back. "You don't care, Tom, you just don't want to go to another funeral." Bill growled in a hellish tone that almost scared me. "NO!  care about you, Bill! You're my damn brother! Of course I care about you!" I said. "No You don't care, okay?! I know you don't!!! After all the times you've made fun of me with your girlfriends about how I was gay, i KNOW you don't care!!! So don't EVEN try to go there! Don't!" Bill snapped back at me, and then stumbled dangerously and almost fell. He got his balance and continued. "Those times you did that really did hurt. Because....Because, Tom I love you. You know, I've always liked you. But You've made fun of me and never did bother to notice." Bill said, looking down at all below him. Those words struck me like an atom bomb. He really does Love me. "Bill....I'm sorry.....just.....please don't jump." I replied. "No, Tom, you're just saying that, you don't really care. you're trying to-" Bill started, but lost his balance. I ran over as fast as I could, and leaned over the side, grabbing his hands. "Bill!!!" I said, trying to pull him up but I couldn't. "Just hold on, okay! don't let go! PLEASE!! I'm sorry for everything, okay! I'm sorry I didn't notice you liked me, I'm sorry I made fun of you! The truth is, I love you, too, jsut don't let go!!" I cried. He stared up at me with wide eyes. "I won't let go, Tom. I beleive you now. I'm sorry." Bill said, crying. He smiled through the tears and I smiled back.....

And then he let go.

To be contiued.

bang bangeddy bang, dont ask,

im making a new fanfic probly that has me, Tiffani, Rose, Charlotte, and soem random emo people in it. yup yups.

Halos And SnakeBites is the title. WOOOOOOOO

exciting isnt it? lol *sarcasm*

Okays, so the first part of this story was 2 chapters in one XD

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{Exaggerating The Barrier Between who I Am And Who I Want To Be}

(Shawn's POV)

We both turned to see a group of preps. "Hahaha, did we scare the emo boys??!!" one said, laughing.

"WATCH OUT! They might go cut themselves and cry!!!" Another said. I felt the puke coming up again. And then next thing I knew, I was back in the bathroom puking up my guts. Then i ran over to the sink and brushed my teeth, trying to get the bitter taste out of my mouth. Then I ran past alex, past the preps, and towards the old abandoned house.

2. hours.

Standing there, cutting myself, and wondering where Alex was. Wondering if he was looking for me. Maybe he got beat up? I hoped not. "Shawn?! SHAWNNY!" I heard a voice yell. "ALEX?!" I exclaimed. And he came running at me and grabed me in a hug. "oh my gawdd, I thought you ran off and killed yourself!!! omg!" He said, hugging me tight. I started to cry. "aww, ShawnyBaby, don't cry. come on, it's okay." Alex said. "I can't help it anymore. It's just...I'm sick of everything!" I sobbed. "Kiss me, Shawny, just real quick." Alex replied. And I did.

It was feeling so right then. Alex's lips against mine. Then it turned to us almost making out, until I heard alex gasp. "W-what's wrong?" I asked. "Your wrist is bleeding, Shawn..." he replied. "Oh....shit..."I said, turning away. "It's okay." He replied, then wrapped the bottom of his shirt around my wrist. I looked up at him and kissed him again.

Then we heard someone walking down the hall.

to be continued.

Chapter One

{Cut My Wrists And Black My Eyes. So I Can Fall Asleep Tonight}

(Shawn's POV)

Maybe it was a bad time for me, as I learned. The cuts up and down my writsts proved not only the nights and time were bad, but my whole life was. 'Not Good Enough'

If you don't understand that, then I'll just explain: im 18, bisexual, emo, and cant seem to fit in, and I don't have any friends.

I had serious problems. Cutting myself, and all this weird itching on my skin was all in my head probably, I'd already had scratched so much I left swollen burns and open flesh. And I was anorexic.

I'm not THAT crazy, am I?

Seriously. Am I that fucked up?

Maybe....

(Alex's POV)

Shawn. The scrawny boy who no one liked because of his style. I liked him, he was cool. But we never talked. He always shyed away from everyone. And he didn't fit in. Emo. The Preps would throw stuff at him, beat him up. It was terrible. He was covered with bruises. And I could even tell that Shawn was anorexic, the way he wore the long shirts but when the wind blew and his shirt stuck to his stomach, I could see he really was. All I could think was "oh my gawd."

But then, even through the the cuts , bruises and anorexia, I couild tell he was just really sweet. And I did have a crush on him.

Chapter Two

(Shawn's POV)

He walked past me all of a sudden. Alex. I stopped in my tracks, he turned his head to face me and smiled, then went on walking down the street. That's when it hit me. He looked at me.

I went home, threw my backpack on my bed, ran into the bathroom, and puked. Over and over 'til I thought I was gonna die. Then I heard a knock on the front door. I quickly stood up, wiped my mouth off, and went to the door and opened it.

"Hey Shawny." Alex said, with a grin. I never noticed Alex before. I wasn't the only emo boy....

"Um, h-hi..." I said, hoping my watery eyes wouldn't give him any idea of questions. But I jinxed it. "what's wrong?" Alex asked. "Nothing, I just...umm.." I started but never finished it. "Shawn, I know what's wrong. You don't fit in, so you turned to cutting yourself and anorexia, didn't you?" He said. I wanted to scream and tell him to shut the fuck up, but I didn't. "Yeah. I did..." I replied, almost crying. "You don't have to, Shawn. There's better things to do." Alex said. And that's when I broke down in tears. "Alex, I can't stand it. Getting beat up every day and then going home and puking your guts out is just too much!" I sobbed. He pulled me into his arms and hugged me. "It's okay, Shawny." He said, running his fingers through my hair.

"AWWWW!!!! FUCKED UP EMO LOVE!!!" Came a voice. "Oh shit." Me and Alex said.

to be continued. I PROMISE! NO JOKE! CUZ SAM WILL HIT ME WITH A FRYING PAN.

thanks to Sam for the title btw!

i used to have a bestest friend eva. his name is James.

he used to be my very top friend on myspace but now he's like my 6th.

we neva talk anymore. i send him messages and comments and he neva replies and he's not on msn. :(

i cant fuckin understand it/ he was my bestest friend, almost like a brother. he used to say he'd marry me if he ddint eva get to marry Sonny Moore. and we used to laugh and send snapvine comments back and forth to each other on snapvine at 10 a.m

where did those times go?!

my stomach hurts so bad and im in tears. i cant stand it anymore. im crying at the moment im typng this. cuz i misss him so bad. i dont know what happened and where the times went. i cant take it anymore! he was the beast thing on this earth but then....everything just ended. no more laughs, no more comments, no more msn, and no more anything. i cant understand it. and i know im sounding like a fuckin drama queen but i jsut cant take this! i miss him too much and idk what happned.

idk where those times went and idk if we'll ever talk again.

im just...feeling blegh right now,.

:(

hehehehe XD

Zacky and Brian snuggled up close to each other in their boyfriend’s bed. The scrawny boy, Zack, woke up slowly to the racket coming up the stairs, a bad vocal impression of a drum and guitar solo, with some words thrown around here and there.

“Bri, Brian… Brian!” Zacky’s voice rose out of a whisper, “Brian, what the fuck is that? Is Jimmy drunk again?”
“Probably,” Brian groaned, turned away from his boyfriend and pulled the zebra-print comforter over his head, “Go back to sleep.”
“Alright…” Zack sighed, leaning over the side of the bed to scratch his dog’s ears and snuggle back up close to Brian, a few giggles escaping his mouth while hands wrapped around his waist, “Syn, stop that!”

The two did their best to ignore the scent of beer wafting into their bedroom from under the door, not that they weren’t used to it or anything, but it wasn’t exactly the scent that you wanted to be smelling while you were necking your lover.

The boys flew apart from one another to each side of the bed as the door slammed open and crashed against the wall, half off the hinges with a huge crack up it from being kicked in. The enormously muscular man’s aviators flew off in one direction as he jumped into the room and landed in some random disco-like pose.

“C’mon, take a bottle, shake it up! Break the bubble! Break it up!!”

Zacky’s green eyes widened with much confusion while Brian just raised his eyebrow and pulled Zack beside him while their other boyfriend leapt up onto the bed in his snakeskin cowboy boots.

“Pour some sugar on me! Ooh, In the name of love! Pour some sugar on me!” he sang half in song and half in his screaming metal voice raiding his vocal chords, “C’mon, fire me up!”

Brian wished to god someone had a video camera at that very moment. Especially to capture Zacky’s bewildered face.

“Matt, what the fuck are you doing!?” Brian laughed hysterically, his sunken in cheeks flushing a bright red with his lack of breath, “Shads, cut it out!”
“….How drunk do you think he is?” Zack snickered into Brian’s neck as he kissed him again before being whisked into Matt’s arms as he jumped off the bed like jumping off an ego-riser and spun Zacky around to dance with him.

“Crazy little Zacky in a one man show! Mirror mannequin, rhythm of love
Sweet dream, saccharine, loosen up!” Shadows grabbed Zacky’s hand to the sky in his own, an arm wrapping around his stomach as he stomped back and forth in some whacky tango-like dance. “You got the peaches, I got the cream!”

Matt let the slightly dizzy Zacky go, grinding his back up against his as he performed his air-guitar solo in a mocking way to the performance he always did with Brian on stage.

Brian smirked as Zacky fell back on his ass on the bed, trying to plant himself there to not be danced with by his wildly drunk lover. Just when he assumed that Matt was done with whatever he was trying to accomplish in his stupor, and easily began to ignore him when he felt the soft lingering of his Synyster’s finger tips trailing over his batwinged baseball tramp-stamp his lead guitarist was pulled away from him into the singer’s arms.

Synyster Gates was always one to play along, doing his little disco-like dancing beside his M. Shadows probably to amuse Zacky more than anything and sang Matt’s Def Leppard cover along with him.

to be continued

Today, This week, blah blah blah.

WHY DID GOD HAVE TO MAKE AUSTRALIA AND INDIANA SOOO FAR APART??!!!??!?!?

WHYY?????!!!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!

i miss my ShastyBoy and James. :(

makes me sad James has GATs, STUPID STUDYING!

Note to James: TWO MORE WEEKS MAN! TWO MORE WEEKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AND...

OMG.

SHASTA.....

(no not Shasta the mother of Ryan Ashley Boyer! THE BOY SHASTA!)

GET.....

ON.....

AND.....

DeViAnTaRt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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*banging head against keyboard and listening to Note To Self*

And Dangit...

Why...

WHY OH WHY....

Once again...

WHY DO AUSTRALIA AND INDIANA HAVE TO BE SO FAR APART!!!>??!!!!!

STUPID DINOSAURS!!!!

YOUR FOOTSTEPS BROKE THE EARTH UP!!

NOW THE CONTINENTS ARE FAR APART!!!

*bangs head on keyboard some more*

Oh I need some sleep.

maybe some good ol' Ritalin

or Tylenol?

i dunno.

I MISS SHASTA AND JAMES!!

AND MY LEG HURTS!!

*cry*

AND....

I...

NEED....

TO...

GO....

SEE...

AVENGED....

SEVENFOLD....

IN....

CONCERT!!!!!
PLEASE MUM????
PLEASE OH PLEASE???

I PROMISE I WONT STEAL SYNYSTER GATES!!!

Maybe....

BUT PLEASE????!!!!?!?!??!??!?!?!?!!??!!?!?!?!?!?!??!???!!?!!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!?!??!?

*CRIE!!!!*

SAMUEL..../GET....ONLINE!!!

I KNOW IT'S NOT THAT LATE ENOUGH FOR YOU NOT TO GET ON!!!!!!

AGH!!!!!!

///_<    <------------------------------ Emo smiley fave that is very very mad.

okayz

im gonna tell u some stuff i have thought of.....and im gonna make no sense......shit. lol.

I have officially decided to start writing Xx SICKK xX stories, as i call em. (a SICKK story i have decided is like Freard or just typical celebrity boysex like i think 2 stories ive done before)

SICKK stories and oneshots is what ill start posting.

DONT THINK OF ME  AS A PERVERT, cuz im not....i hate pervs. lol. im not trying to be one, im just interested in writing SICKK stories and stuff.

well

there ya have it. end of story

okay, this is a fanfic thats gonna involve EXPLICIT boysex between Ronnie and Max from escape The Fate.........dont read if u hate ETF or gay stories. You can hate me if ya want. i dont care. :D

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(Max's POV)

so freaking nervous it was unreal. thats what i was. nervous. Ronnie kissed me more. "Max, you're okay, man." Ronnie said, kissing me more as we fell back on his bed. He had managed to drag me out of the shower into his room and locked the door. "Uhh..." I moaned as Ronnie bit my neck a bit. "Turn over. on your hands and your knees." Ronnie said. I did so. But Ronnie didn't do what I had thought he was gonna do. He moved under to where my balls are. I started shaking again. He pushed down hard against my hips, shoving my dick into his mouth all the way. I moaned. It was a bit unexpected. He sucked harder, making me moan louder. "R-Ron....Ronnie....s-stop....im gonna.....oh fuck....im gonna c-" I started, but too late. I came right into Ronnie's mouth. He pulled my balls out of his mouth, and swallowed. He pushed me back over on my back. I plushed even more. Bt he grinned. And then threw me back onto my hands and knees. Then he softly pushed into me. Pain roulleted throughout my body. "RONNIE!!!!! OWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!! Omg, it hurrttttsssss...." I exclaimed. "Whoa, Max, calm down babe. It's okay, it'll feel good in a sec here." Ronnie replied. I was trying to calm down, but I was feeling just pain. Ronnie thrusted his dick deeper in me. Pain. "owwww, Ronnie...." I said, trying to breath. He pulled my hips up higher, rubbing my balls and making me moan louder. He thrusted his dick even deeper, catching me right in the right spot there. And the pleasure built up inside me. "Ronniee,,,,...." I moaned. And I finally heard him moan in pleasure himself.

(Ronnie's POV)

"Fuuucccckkkkk Roonnniiiieeeee!!!!!!!!!!" Max moaned under me as I fucked him even harder. I could feel myself climaxing. "Oh fu-.....omigosh......oh shiit, Max..." I moaned. And then i came right inside him, making him almost scream my name, but loud enough that someone could hear it all the way down the hall:: "RRRRRRRROOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!"

I was trying my best to fuck him hard even after my climax, but he was getting tight. And finally we both collapsed on the bed, sweaty and worn out.

"I fuckin love you, max." I grinned. His eyes half opened. "Love you too, Ronnie." He replied.

Then someone knocked on the door

t o b e c o n t i n u e d

(Max's POV)

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Dear Diary,

     Yeah, I know it's gay for a guy to have a diary, as some people think. But screw that. I'm writing in it today because I'm having issues with life. I'm sick of being the one who's always left out, the one who's not acknowledged. And the one who's pushed round and screamed at by other people who think I'm too low class to be accepted. I'm sick of it. And another bad thing....is that I'm so in loe.....that it's unreal. Her name is Delilah Emmerson. We're best friends to the end, but I don't know what I'll do right now since I'm so in love with her. It's hard for me to go a night without thinking about her. I don't know what to do.

10/23/08

Max.

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   "HAHAHA!!!! Oh my gods, Maxi! You think you can get Delilah!? Oh holy fucking hell, Max!! You can't!! Haha I'd love to see you try, bud!! Get outta my face you 'tard!" Ronnie giggled, throwing a beer bottle at me. I ran back up to my room.

Hey There, Delilah, What's It Like In New York City?

  Yeah. Kinda like the Plain White T's song. Delilah WAS in New York City.  And I missed her terribly.

I'm A Thousand Miles Away....

 She was a thousand miles away. I was in California....she was in New York.

But, Girl, Tonight You Look So Pretty Yes You Do. Time Square Can't Shine As Bright as You. I swear It's True.

  I wanted her. And wanted her sooo fucking bad.

That's when I set off on foot............to New York City.

to be continued

okay

so i promised UltraVires i'd hel spread their name to people who love music. they have an account on here, and u should really go check it out because they have AMAZING muic! and they're also really nice. lol. soo yeah, you should really go check them out and listen to their songs and help spread their name over buzznet, ur town, myspace, anywhere like that. Just please spread the word! X)

Peace.Love.and Rock N' Roll

Jess {{RideTheseMotherfuckingWings!}}

Matt: Dude, Syn, would you SJUT UP about pie?!!!

Syn: How would you like to suck my balls???!!!

Matt: WHAT?!

Syn: Oh, yeeah, i know you heard me.

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Rev: Lickin' On my nuts, suckin' on my nuts, fuckin grinding down on them nuts! JOHNNY!!!!

Matt: ewwww, wtf??

Rev: what?! Johnny IS lickin, suckin, and grinding down on my nuts. see! *points to Johnny who is sitting over in a corner eating pecans, walnuts, and pistachios*

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Val: OMG??!!!! MATT!!! where's you take Syn, Rev, Johnny and Zacky to??!!!

Matt: Don't worry, babe, we only went to the mall

Val: THE MALL CLOSES AT NINE!!!! ITS TWELVE!!!!

Matt: i took them out to get icecream

Syn: when the fuck did we get icecream??!!!!!

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Rev: JUST A SPOONFULL OF REVVY HELPS THE DRUGS GO DOWN!!! WOOT!!!

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Syn: I'm gonna fucking fuck you Zacky!!!!

Zack: WHAT?????!!!What the hell??!! Why???!!! IM not gay!!!!

Syn: em. you suck.

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Matt: why is the rum always gone?

okay

these are TO BE CONTINUED

Xx(Rose's POV)xX

I awoke to a thud coming from under my bed. I got up and blindly looked under to see whatever the hell it was. "What The Fu-....SYN! Why are you under my bed???" I exclaimed. "Umm.....Matt kicked me out of the bus last night." Synester replied. "Why?" I asked, rubbing my tired eyes. "Uhh...cuz...cuz I wanted to go to sleep with him. He said yes. But I also wanted to bring my stuffed Zabras with me. He said no. So I started having a fit. aaaand he threw me out the tour bus." He replied. "Uh...then why are you sleeping under MY bed???" I asked, annoyed a bit. "Cuz the floor is comfy." He grinned. I sighed and layed back down on my bed, trying to go back to sleep. Zacky was snoring, of course. But, fuck it, I went back to sleep with the pillow over my head.

A Few Hours Later

Xx(ZackyV's POV)xX

"GET THE FUCK UP OUTTA THE BED YOU MOTHERFUCKER!!!!!!!!!!!" I heard someone yell. Then I got smacked with a pillow. "Agh!!! Huh? ?WTF??? Who the fuck?..." I said, sitting up. "I Tried to tell you 3 times before to get the fuck up, but you snore too loud, ya fucktard." Rev grinned. "Why the fuck do I need to get up yet?? Tis like 6 a.m!!!" I replied. "CUZ ITS MOTHERFUCKING CHRISTMAS MORNING!!!!!! SO GET YOUR ASS UP!!!!!!!!" Rev said, then ran back downstairs. So me and Rose got up and walked downstairs. Everyone was up and opening presents. I went ahead and sat down. "Here V!" Rev giggled, throwing me a black and red box. I opened it and pulled out the DVD. "Rev! Why the hell did you get me Girls Gone Wild?" I asked. "I Dunno....maybe it'll solve the nights Rose and helena go off to go play rock shows at Boney Junes!!!!" He laughed. I sighed. "You fucker." I laughed. I then handed Rose my present I got her.

Xx(Rose's POV)xX

I opened the present. And gasped. Zacky looked at me and grinned as I took out the blood red diamond ring. "Heehe, thought you'd like it, babe." He grinned. "OMG! Zacky!! THANK YOU!!" I grinned, hugging him. After a while, Brian, Johnny and Matt were asleep on the floor, buried under piles of wrapping paper, gift boxes, stickers, tape and tags. I was sitting beside Zacky, happy as hell. But I felt sorry for Rev. He didn't have anyone to celebrate his Christmas morning with. He was laying on the floor listening to From First To Last's Emily. Then I thought of my best friend to the end, Helena..

to be continued

Note from me: okayz, so i havent posted in a while cuz i been grounded, depressed, and freaking writer's block syndrome *sigh* but im posting a fanfic now. And yes, this time im going to let you guys help me alongside with ideas if you'd like. so in a coment, if u like this chapter...wait one sec... *leans head out the window* SHUT THE FUCK UP YOU COYOTES!!!-.... sorry bout that. as i was saying: if u like this chapter, you can gladly leave me an idea for the next chapter in either messages or comments or notes. well ima shut up now and type teh fic! XD

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Prelude
Darkness. All there was was darkness. Never had they believed when they named their album "City of Evil", that someday the would find the City of Evil. Well they did. What an ironic world this is. Anyways, they had come upon the edge of the city of evil and they had no idea where in the hell they were. They were lost, and had nowhere to go. So they took their first steps into the city fo evil.
..........
"Where are we?" The shortest guy asked a young black haired girl.
The City of Evil" she replied easily.
The five foreiners exchanged uneasy glances.
"Well, whats the closest city?" the same guy asked.
"There is no getting away from the city of evil once you enter. One step into this city, you can never leave." she replied.
They exchanged dark looks. The City of Evil?
"Well then, I'm Jimmy. But my nickname is Rev." He said, holding out his hand.
"Helena...Helena Atreyu." She said giving him her hand. Her ice blue eyes shone from behind black eyeliner and pale skin.
"This is Matt Shadows, Synyster Gates, Zacky Vengeance, and Johnny Christ" Reverend said, introducing his fellow friends to this beuatiful young girl.
"Could you show us around? and maybe could we stay at your place, we don't have any money." Matt said hopefully.
"Sure."She smiled, but then a dark look passed over her face."But" she said, lowering her voice and peering around."Don't ever, EVER talk to one of the government officals. Understand?"
The five guys nodded.

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LATER
"Who are you?" A serious looking man asked Rev.
"Evan." Rev replied uneasily, following Hel's advice about not telling anyone your true name."Who are you?" He returned.
"Thats classified information. I'm with the government."
Rev and the others blanched, what would happen now that they talked to a government offical?

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"What do we do?" Johnny asked.
"I'm not sure." Matt replied. They were locked in an extreamily small cell with no windows and no way out.
""Shit! We can't get out." Synester said.
"No shit sherlock." Zacky replied sarcastically.
"Shut up!" Matt yelled. "Somebody's coming"
An extreamly large man walked into the cell and grabbed Matt by the scruff of the neck. Matt was pulled out of the cell and the others followed in the same way.
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MATT'S POV

We were brought to a large room, with towering ceilings and multiple arches. A great fire blazed in the center of this great room. Sticks of metal were placed in the fire. With a wave of nausea, I realized what they were doing. My head spun and I lost my balance. I came crashing to the floor with a bang that echoed through this room. One of these people (should I call them peopl? Helena told me they were people, but yet they weren't. lets just call them people.) pulled out a stick of metal and turned around to face us. with a malicous grin he walked toward me. On the end of the stick a red hot brand in the shape of a crescent moon. He put it back, just when I thought he was going to use it. "I think, before we brand you, we will let you rot! Take them to the Dungeons."

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Rev's POV

All five of us sat round the room. I was shaking nervously. "Rev! REV! Don't get yourself scard! You'll throw up if you do!" Zacky snapped. "I CANT HELP IT!" I repleid. But I felt the wave of nausea. In seconds I was on my hands and knees puking my guts out. Everyone else just sighed as if not caring. We needed to get out...

But How?

to be continued!

yep

im grounded

for A MONTH

cuz i got detention

3 days straight

:(

aw well, ill try to sneak on

okays, so i had really awsome comments from my buds on the first chapter, wich made me really happy. And this story WAS actually just supposed to be a oneshot, (even tho it DID say to be continued :( ) SOOO, im posting Chapter TWO for yous!!!

ENJOY!

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Chapter Two

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Xx Should've Said Something, But I Said It Enough xX

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(Bert's POV)

   The guy...he just stood in front of me. A bloody ripped to shreds face inches away from my own. He was so much taller then me. It scared me so bad. Blood dripped right onto my shirt. I gagged. The bird dude jsut stood there, staring at me with those horrible blueish eyes. I took off and ran for the hotel room. Then I was knocked to the ground, the bird dude on top of me. With the mask back on. He smelled of blood, decay, and frankencinse. I gagged again. The razor beak slid across my face, cutting my cheek a bit. I felt my own blood drip onto the floor. The bird...he just stared down at me, my blood on his beak. Then, with a swift move, I kicked him right off me. And his bird ass fell to the floor. I caught speed and ran right into the door of the hotel room and fell to the floor, my vision blurred. All I could tell was Dan, Aiden, Quinn, and Jeph picking me up off the floor..then I blacked out.

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Xx If Your Heart's Still Beating It Must Be The Blood, If Your Lungs Are Still Working, It Must Be The Month xX

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               I finally woke up.. Aiden was laying beside me. "Hey sleepy head." She said, giving me a noogie, screwing up my already screwed up blonde. I gave her a grin. My cheek still hurt really bad. She pulled me tighter against her. "Are you okay, Bert?" She asked. "Yeah...yeah, I'm okay." I replied, not telling her that my cheek hurt so freaking bad. We started making out. And then Quinn had to scream for me. "BRET!!! Bret you damned idiot! GET THE FRICK IN HERE!!!!!!!" He yelled. I pulled my lips from aiden's and ran into the other room. "Yeah? What's wrong?" I asked, pulling on my grey jacket. "DAN PUKED ON THE FLOOR!!!!" Quinn whined. "IT'S NOT MY FAULT I ATE PIE!! Wait....yeaha it is. Dang." Dan sighed. "Clean it up yourself, Dan!" I exclaimed. Then I ran back into the room where Aiden was and flopped back beside her, starting to make out with her again. "BRET!!!!!!!! DAN BROKE JEPHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Quinn yelled. "frick frick frickety fricking frick!!!!" I sighed. "Jepha....he's eh broke!" Dan sighed. "Don't break Jepha then!!!!!" I yelled. "Okay." Dan replied. Jepha was laying on the floor laughing and crying. "What happened, Jeph?" I asked him, helping him up. "Dan threw a stick and hit me in the ankle. It HURT!!!!" Jeph cried. "Well, go sit down then. "Nah, me, Quinn, and Dan are gonna go to our room and sleep" Jeph repleid, then all 3 of the idiots ran off. I sat back down on the yellowed couch and then somehow, I fell through the cushions. "AIDEN!!!" I tried to yell, as I fell through, but my mouth was filled with cold red inted water. I was floating in a strange weird lake surrounded by a cluster of dead black trees. My foot hit something. I picked it up. And screamed. IT was a corpse! Rotting one, too. I quickly threw it back into the deep water. Then something pulled me under. I floated under the cold black water. "AIDEN!!!" I tried to scream again, but I just choked on the cold gross tasting water. I finally managed to float to the surface. I gulped in air like crazy and managed to get on a bit of flaoting land that was dark and snow covered. I got up and looked round. Black. All pitch black. I could tell that the snow had blood on it from I guess bodies maybe. I started walking. And walked into somewhere I didn't want to be in.      

              The smell was horrid. And my shoes squished through the dead rotting corpses of dead people and animals. Blood covered my shoes and the ends of my pant legs. I ennded up puking. Water and stomach fluid. Sick. I continued walking. The land seemed endless. Then I ran into another thing I didn't want to see.......

       to be continued......